Disagreement based on reading

 paper details 1. I have written my agreement regarding to one individual statement that teacher provided.(it was summarized in the paper) based on book material. 2. check if my essay is clearly written and organized, concise, grammatically correct, analytically sound, and demonstrate a thorough understanding of the reading assignments. 3. Please feel free to add more description if you feel is unclear, change grammar, delete anything. Especially, on the second half of the paper, I feel like I did not know how to explain clearly. Please help me to clarified it. !!!!!! Look at the summary part. (the main part of this assignment is to help me make the paper clear, and make my opinion clear)