Homeland Security
Homeland Security Description Hello, here are the Observations I have caught and would like to get fixed before Tuesday 27th Nov 18. If I have too, I will Pay more to get these mistakes fixed and add on to make 10 pages. Did not pull information together to clearly state why Boko Haram is a transnational threat. Be sure to be clear about why they’re. I think the paragraph discussing Boko Haram’s threat to the Nigerian government was referring to national security, but either way this needed far greater clarity. You need to clearly state why your issue is or is not a threat to the sovereignty of a nation state. The paper missed this mark. While the media is important to globalization, this was more of a local example that you provided than an international one—was the media instrumental in having recruits join BH from around the globe? Be sure to edit paper more carefully Please respond to these questions in addition to the above mentioned observations to make paper more clear. 1. What are other countries doing to combat Boka Haram? 2. What do you think about their responses? 3. What are your proposal to help fight Boko Haram? 4. Conclusion.
